Monday, November 24, 2008

First Finished Song

But not really, I would really appreciate any criticism from anyone who reads this. So here it is and I hope you enjoy it.

Uncertainty

I can’t tell you how I’m feeling

‘Cause I don’t really know myself

I can’t tell you how I’m feeling

But I sure could use your help

 

I think I might be in love

But that would be a first

Could you give me some of your love?

For that is what I thirst

 

I’ve just been walkin’ ‘round town

With these thoughts stuck in my head

Feelin’ up and feelin’ down

Just going where I’m led

 

Maybe with you there to help me

I could lead a normal life

And if you were to love me

It wouldn’t be filled with so much strife

 

And when you need me to be there

You know I always will

Maybe as a shoulder to cry on

Or who would you have me kill?

 

My road is just so unclear

And now I have to go

I would have nothing to fear

But there are so many unknowns

 

Even with all this uncertainty

There’s one thing that I know

I’d stay with you for eternity

That’s all you really need to know

2 comments:

Cassidi Marie said...

Aw, Hair, it's awesome! I really like it. It reminded me of this quote from George Harrison's [Of the Beatles] son said:
"About 95% of rock songs are about love and heartbreak. So by that standard, I suppose the most important thing for a musician to have is a muse."

And by the way, yeah, I just invited myself to your blog. lol.
=]

-Cass

Kara said...

i do really like it:]